Definitely #2, Gingerpaw.

Edit: Ouch, just realized your Nephini Theme is awfully close to an existing Neph Theme, Lazy Days.

Here's Lazy Days--


--and here's yours--


Don't get me wrong, it's a great Theme, but it may be too close to Lazy Days to be selected.

Yuki (is it okay to call you that?), my favorite of your designs is definitely the Candy Corn Bulbori. I particularly like (1) that you're not afraid to use white and (2) the hint of light green in the color of Mutation Three. Real candy corn doesn't actually include light green, but you've used it in a way that makes the Bulbori look even more like it's candy-corn-colored. I don't know how else to explain it; it's like artists who do really good skin tones, and when you look closely, you can see they've used some shades of green, which aren't actually in any human skin tones, yet somehow it ends up working.

One note: I think you may have made too many slots white--


See how the Fox Tail, Chibi Wings, and part of the Ribbon come together to create a large white area?

The same thing happens with Dutch and with Himalayan--




I'm not sure what to do about it, but perhaps having only two slots that are pure white would help.

You may call me that, and thank you for pointing that out. I tried to make them creme without over doing the orange/yellow but it seems I overdid the white, lol. XD As for the green, it shows up yellow to me, one being more a pure yellow, while the other is more golden, however I honestly did consider green from the pumpkin shaped candy corn, so as long as it works, I'm glad you like it. ^^ As for making too many white, I'd say that might be a tiny bit of a stretch, simply because the wings are technically orange. If anything, it's just the set up for the female bulbori. If you switch it to male, it's not as noticeable.

Could I get critiques on mine please ^^ specifcally puffs, qitari and ryori

Anyone want to attack any of my imagination babies: particularly my Trickster Zolnixi or Autumn Night Nytekrie?

They will be found here:
https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=29587&page=16

I don't know if I have copied any existing designs or what-not.

Ryori:

I really like this design.

However, I find that the dark mutation 3 really stands out in an unsettling way when used.






I opted to change it to match the grey/bluish of colour 3:






Or something similar...

Or perhaps an alternative can be to change colour 3 to match original mutation 3.






Edit: Although; dark mutation 3 does match your other Ryori I plugged into the generator





It matches on the condition that there is one other dark to compliment it, but if there is only red and white, then the dark stands out.

Take my advice with a pinch of NaCl...

Thank you so much for the feedback, I definitely appreciate it.

To start, I'm probably going to keep the Bonfire Ryori the way it is for now, simply because I was going for a thicker smoky feel with the brownish grey in G1 and wood in M1 and M3. I appreciate your concern with it, though!

The Faelora eye-color can't really be edited to yellow because it will mess with other accent colors like G3's Leaf Vein.

I edited the Blood Oath Nyte a little to try and bring out M1 and M3 a little better, thank you for the advice there. :)

Thank you for the compliments on the Bulbori, the Neph, and the Luffox - I could eat up the Bulbori and Luffox too! ^_^

The Nixi was the biggest catch on your part, thank you so much for that, I struggled in finding a color that would work well, but I eventually settled on the bright pastel green. I like it much better now!

At the time of my writing this message I am working through the other designs and making changes where they seem to need them most.

I'm not a huge fan of Kelpari either, so I'll probably let the theme stay as it is for now, unless I come up with something better and change it out entirely.

I will also likely leave the Draeyl alone, as I want the green to have a faded look, like older moss clinging to ancient stone. :)

Everything else is still in the air.

Have a pleasant evening, and again, many thanks!

Yeah thats what I liked the least about it, the black. I switched m3 and c3 to a dark grey and I think it works much better :D thanks for thinking of that

OOooohhhh Could I get a critique? Clickeroo

Particularly the first few. The last two/three are not particularly good.

Does anyone else have a /ton/ of trouble designing for the Lunemara? It just feels so unbalanced.

I'm going to do some favourites now. c: This is for pages 1-11 I'll put more up later. >.<

Aurleon: Haunted by Barcode454

Spangled Night by Scathreoite

Icy Pool by Watercolors


Bulbori: Gourd by FForFox


Draeyl: Foolish Fire by Arkhantha

Fright Night by Xavion


Faelora: Umber Forest by Hanamomoya

Foggy Night by Gingerpaw


Kelpari:

Luffox: Maple by Savynn


Lunemara: Frosty Leaves by Gingerpaw

Sweet Treat by Bumblebreeze


Lupora: Midnight Marauder by Yukiyume


Morkko: Autumn Equinox by Vulpie

Gravestone by Xavion


Nephini: Blood Moon by Hundenelsker


Nytekrie: Thunderbird by Rixva


Qitari: Burning Fields by Sleepwalking

Scarecrow by Gingerpaw


Ryori: Dream Eater by Darkwingedangel

Burning Bones by Zelly


Sylvorpa: Autumn Bog by Yukiyume

Shadow Spectre by Bumblebreeze

Tree Bark by Meowth27

Water Snake by LunarStorm


Vulnyx:

Zolnixi: Blue Fire by Sleepwalking