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Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 1/2/2018 at 9:09 PM
Post #81
You slowly blink as light blinds you. When your eyes adjusted, you look around in amazement, you are standing on a mountain top, with forest all around. You can see something closer to the tree line, a gust of wind brings it's familiar scent to you and you realize it's something you've hunted before.
I narrow my eyes and slowly pad towards the scent, sniffing the air.
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 1/2/2018 at 9:09 PM
Post #82
You slowly blink as light blinds you. When your eyes adjusted, you look around in amazement, you are standing on a mountain top, with forest all around. You can see something closer to the tree line, a gust of wind brings it's familiar scent to you and you realize it's something you've hunted before.
I narrow my eyes and slowly pad towards the scent, sniffing the air.
Vineyiea
Level 75
Guardian of the Realm
Joined: 5/2/2017
Threads: 187
Posts: 5,109
Posted: 1/2/2018 at 9:15 PM
Post #83
(the wolf is Snowblossim, so ping her also in your response)
The prey freezes, looking at something behind you before darting away. A wolf is standing a distance away watching you
When she was a pup, she was obsessed with magic and other species. While she grew up, she began to play around with magic. One day she hopes to become a powerful mage.
What did the rules tell you to include?
Include this line in your post.
Here you are
Edited By Sketched on 1/2/2018 at 10:06 PM.
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 1/2/2018 at 11:00 PM
Post #86
The prey freezes, looking at something behind you before darting away. A wolf is standing a distance away watching you
"Hello?" I call out warily
Mhm Vine you check out my new RP o3o
https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=55974
[quote=1116000]
"Oh.. seems I spoiled your hunt, sorry about that. I'm Dusk by the way, you?"
"I'm Cheshire," i say, dipping my head.
IvyCat
Level 62
Trickster
Joined: 8/23/2016
Threads: 106
Posts: 23,715
Posted: 1/3/2018 at 2:21 AM
Post #89
Would you mind changing your backstory? An idea of the good type of backstory for this roleplay is Katelynns if you need an idea. My issue is really is that you're hinting that you start with magic - that would have to make you a high shaman/ chief rank that has magic. While we're fine for roleplayers learning magic, it comes later on in the roleplay and you don't start with it. Finally, it doesn't seem like you read Vineyieas page at all. The Religion has a name and her world has a name.
Thank you.
Edited By IvyCat on 1/3/2018 at 2:23 AM.
Vigy
Level 65
Trickster
Joined: 2/13/2017
Threads: 127
Posts: 10,863
Posted: 1/3/2018 at 2:26 AM
Post #90
I was extremely confused signing up for this, and I'm still very confused. I'd rather not play, It kinda lost my interest.
Sorry about that.
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