Could you please find an image & Change MoonClans name to something else? Also please go back to read the rules properly, otherwise added to waiting list~

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=53802&page=93#929 Author: IvyCat Time Posted: 12/11/2017 at 1:46 AM She looked a little surprised, "It takes practise.. it's easier to learn how to catch land prey first."

Silversong laughed. "The smell of fish was so overpowering, I couldn't smell anything else." Silversong drank some water to quench her thirst and padded some distance away from the river, trying to scent anything that wasn't fish.

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=53802&page=93#930 Author: IvyCat Time Posted: 12/11/2017 at 1:48 AM You manage to get to sleep, but it was uncomfortable. you may dream how you wish

Dream:

Fire surrounds me. I can't see it but I can hear it crackling and feel its heat. Mewling of young kits, wait, that seems to include me. I'm a kit! But then that means... I open my eyes and stagger to my paws, just in time to see my mother stagger away, my brother in her jaws and my sister on her back. I watch them go silently, I know how this dream ends. I huddle in the back of the den in terror as the flames draw closer.

Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=53802&page=94#931 Author: IvyCat Time Posted: 12/11/2017 at 1:49 AM Could you please find an image & Change MoonClans name to something else? Also please go back to read the rules properly, otherwise added to waiting list~

(Oh ok sorry :) )
Did I fix it?
Cat name: Moonpaw (Moonrise then Moonstar)
(Current) Clan name: Rainclan
Cat gender & age: Female 8 moons

Personality: She is distant and hard to make friends with but is loyal to her friends over her clan.
Backstory: Her father was killed in a battle with their rival clan, Dawnclan, so her mother took Moonkit and her brother, Sunkit into the forest to hide. Their clan was destroyed and so they set off to look for somewhere to stay. But the wild is a dangerous place and their mother never was one for fighting so she passed away when they were only 6 moons old. Fortunately, the siblings got a little training from their mother before she passed, and were able to survive until they made to to somewhere safe. She lost her brother while crossing some rapids but was able to make it to Rainclan.
What happened to family?: Her mother is dead and her brother is missing.
Ever seen a fight/ death?: Yes. When she was very small she saw the battle between Dawnclan and Duskclan, and she saw her mother die.
Past mates?: N/A
Have you read rules?: Yes
Extra info: She is usually hunting or in the medicine den.
Flaws: She can be overprotective of the ones she loves, as she does not want to lose them like she lost her family and clan, she is hard to get to know because she is cold and distant not wanting to befriend anyone, for fear she might lose them. She is also not apposed to killing if need be, because of her overprotectiveness and on-edge childhood.
Good things: She greatly values her friends, even if she is scared of losing them, and is understanding to those who have gone through hardships, especially if they are young.
Skills: Agility 1/5 Stamina 2/5 Strength 2/5 Caring 2/5

Sparrowkit shook her head and mumbled it quietly, "Pa-Robinkit is out hunting"

Patchflame nodded

Sparrowkit shook her head and mumbled it quietly, "Pa-Robinkit is out hunting"
(Now I'm really curious as to what she was going to say...)
She nodded, mostly making out the words, trying to shake off her nightmare. "He's going to make a fine warrior," she meowed.

I believe you need to change her first name to a kittypet/rogue name, you need to add a picture of her, and find the codeword in the rules. (And she's technically not supposed to have previously lived in a clan or anything like that). (Also supposed to be closer to warrior age.)

Cat name: Shadow (Shadowheart then Shadowstar)
Clan name: Rainclan
Cat gender & age: Female, 10 moons
Appearance: All black with sharp green eyes, and short, sleek fur.
Personality: She is distant and hard to make friends with but is loyal to her friends over her clan.
Backstory: When she was a kit, rouges killed her mother and siblings while her father was out hunting. She managed to escape through hole in the brambles and ran as far away as she could. She was able to survive until she found a rouge who then took care of her until she was 8 moons. She traveled to a twoleg nest and met a nice kittypet named Lotus who told her of a mysterious group of cats living in the woods. She set out to find them but it took 2 moons for her to find any of the clan.
What happened to family?: Her mother and siblings are dead and her father is missing.
Ever seen a fight/ death?: Yes. When she was a kit she saw her mother and siblings die.
Past mates?: N/A
Have you read rules?: Yes
Extra info: She is usually hunting or in the medicine den.
Flaws: She can be overprotective of the ones she loves, as she does not want to lose them like she lost her family. She is hard to get to know because she is cold and distant not wanting to befriend anyone, for fear she might lose them. She is also not apposed to killing if need be, because of her overprotectiveness and the harshness of her experiences.
Good things: She greatly values her friends, even if she is scared of losing them, and is understanding to those who have gone through hardships, especially if they are young.
Skills: Agility 1/5 Stamina 2/5 Strength 2/5 Caring 2/5

(For some reason it won't let me post a picture)

Looks much better!
When you right-click the image you want to use, do you click click 'copy image address' or 'copy'? (You need to click 'copy image address').