1757

OMFG XDD
Lmao..! xDDDD

Your story/route is KILLINGGG MEEE xDD
Look at it, dang it XDDDDD

You feel a sigh slip from your lips, scooping all three eggs into your arms. The area was quiet, even serine if you felt that. You couldnt help yourself looking around the large cave. The walls on closer inspection where a misty gray, yet held a hollow sadness to them. They seemed to breathe, never to choke anyone who decided to explore or even stay there. Rather the air was light, soft, yet not even cold nor warm. It seemed to hold no temperature at all. The atmosphere was welcoming, a gentle hug from one's family, or the true recognition of safety.

Rewrite
You felt a gental sigh slip from you lips, scooping up teh eggs into your arms. The cave was at restt, even serine if you felt that. Yet you couldnt help looking around the generally large cage, decorated with towering colums? -(Replace word iwht the name of the thingies T.T) They way the light from the small, and clear little pond reflected off of the misty gray walls of the cave. Yet the gentel light failed to hide the seeming hollowness of the wall. PAHHHHH



EHHHH!!! I'm not even finished yettt!

1758

Looking forward to reading the rest. I know you don't like coffee, do you like energy drinks?

1579

My point was to show you how I am failing at spelling and so on so far in rewriting and sorting the thoughts.. :P

And sure, I guess I like those. I generally only drink Gatorade, Sprite, water, and apple juice. The kind I think you're implying are quite rare of me to have.

Words - 430

Amount of words in the route/story excluding the rewrite. *o*
Ik, not much, but its on 10.5 size and it's LONG. Or looks that way. Just about a personaly record for meee BD

1580
I didn't want to say anything about the bad spelling. I don't really drink Gatorade, sprite or apple juice. And I definitely don't drink enough water. I drink milk, some mixed juice, lemonade, Red Bull Blue Edition, coffee, tea, hot chocolate and wine.

1781

XD Pointing out my spelling mistakes literally bother me none. When it comes to stories like that, I like to know my misspells. Lol!

You screwed us up with the numbers! You dropped 180!

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1763

Dang it! XD

There we go! No point in showing you this rn, but hey, IM WEIRD XDD
But now it's patched up a sufficient amount so I can sleep xD

You felt a gentle sigh slip from you lips, scooping up the eggs into your arms. The cave was at rest. Yet you couldn't help looking around the generally large cavern, decorated with sharp thorns protruding from its skin. Even the way the light from the small little pond reflected off of the misty gray walls, giving it a lovely blue shine. But even the light could not hide the hollowness that resided within the walls. Nor could the almost breathtaking beauty of the moss lining the cracks, making the scars beautiful, along with the hiding plants distracted you from the way the air was. The air was soft, mellow even. It didn't hold a temperature --or one that you could notice. There was no hassle in breathing, either, as it came smoothly.

1764

breathing,e?

Edit: Never mind, you already fixed it, lol.

1765

I noticed that XD It's fixed now!

Edit* Well, I'm tired. So I'm off now! Weee~?

1766

Goodnight!