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Articu
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 4/20/2016
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Posted: 9/24/2019 at 9:05 AM Post #941

autumn wreath (sorry for blurry image)



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i chose autumn wreaths because my mom always hangs them up around the house, and they always smell good. sometimes they smell sweet from little berries, and sometimes they have that fallen leaves smell. you know, the one that's kind of musty but it smells good because it mixes with cool air and it sharpens the scent. and the little traces of cinnamon and pumpkin and other spices really make everything come together for me ^D^

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@sairento

holy cheese this is beautiful. it was a real struggle to find anything to change about it. it's wonderful; the blue-greys and yellow-oranges combine beautifully to make an extremely well-crafted design. however, i think that there is a bit too much blue in they grey. if you edged towards a grey-violet/indigo that also pulled more towards they grey side, i think it would work just a touch better. making the oranges range from yellow to a red-orange would also better bring out the morning sunlight peeking in through the fog.

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Edited By Articu on 9/24/2019 at 3:42 PM.
Vanikmal
Level 71
Trickster
Joined: 2/11/2017
Threads: 65
Posts: 1,146
Posted: 9/24/2019 at 10:23 AM Post #942
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Pumpkin Spice Nytekrie



Critiqued Version:





Critique:

Your design is very beautiful and works pretty well with the picture given, but I think It needs a little bit less brown and more autumn-y leaf colors. Some colors need to be dulled down just a little bit, and some look like they need to become darker. It's traits also make it look a bit disorganized.

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Critique:

Edited By Koterfaye on 9/26/2019 at 3:01 PM.
Articu
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 4/20/2016
Threads: 146
Posts: 1,782
Posted: 9/24/2019 at 11:27 AM Post #943
update to the previous design: i lightened g2 color, then had it swap places with m1



so that became this



edit: i'll have to work on g3 coloration
Edited By Articu on 9/24/2019 at 11:31 AM.
Sunflora
Level 71
Ghost Writer
Joined: 6/6/2018
Threads: 10
Posts: 536
Posted: 9/24/2019 at 12:21 PM Post #944
1st off, the Neph looks super pretty. I wish you the best of luck with the design. Looking at the original and the edited one, I think you made the right call changing the M1 color (that was one of the ones I was gonna suggest changing but we had the same idea XD) making it lighter was the right way to go. I also agree with working on the G3 but I have no idea what color to change it to. I'm working on different color combinations at the moment and if I come up with anything, I will let you know and if you come up with anything, I can't wait to see what you do!
Articu
Level 70
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 4/20/2016
Threads: 146
Posts: 1,782
Posted: 9/24/2019 at 12:27 PM Post #945
sweet! i really appreciate it. thanks a lot <3
Akirashadowwolf
Level 54
Snow Wars Combatant
Joined: 10/2/2018
Threads: 39
Posts: 933
Posted: 9/25/2019 at 11:59 AM Post #946
I'm having to opt out. In the middle of a college project
Duckbunny427
Level 69
Nature Walker
Joined: 3/12/2019
Threads: 66
Posts: 1,632
Posted: 9/25/2019 at 7:34 PM Post #947
Spiced Cider



Critique:
I don't think the Western Saddle and Spring Blossoms went with the design. I also think the colors were a little dark, especially if your inspiration was hay.
Edited By Duckbunny427 on 9/27/2019 at 4:35 PM.
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 9/25/2019 at 7:36 PM Post #948
please add in critique for your post to be valid.
Duckbunny427
Level 69
Nature Walker
Joined: 3/12/2019
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Posts: 1,632
Posted: 9/25/2019 at 7:39 PM Post #949
Sorry! I forgot! I'll go do that.
Which design do I critique? I'm kinda confused about that.
Edited By Duckbunny427 on 9/25/2019 at 7:39 PM.
Limor
Level 72
The Kind-Hearted
Joined: 7/5/2016
Threads: 293
Posts: 19,132
Posted: 9/25/2019 at 7:49 PM Post #950
Koterfaye's
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