Hi all.
I'm writing a book.
Based on my rpg Reconstruciton.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PPw9PmJ37HLYVmbya2LTG2hYwqVlWtOFGZBbF3BS8Po/edit?usp=sharing


Sugguestions are welcome! Feel free to post XD

Also if you'd like to be added to pinglist whenever I add a decent amount let me know :)

@scoutwolf, larkien, @lalalanmao, grapejuice

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Link: https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=81699&page=1#10 Author: Scoutwolf Time Posted: 10/28/2019 at 5:20 PM Before I really get into this, just remember that to each writer there is a different style and not everything I say will match with you, and not everything you say will match with me(not that the last part matters much at the moment.) I love it! I mean, if it's just a rough draft, it's perfect enough. It looks better than a lot of my drafts. I can't find wrong to mention(other than a few simple writing errors in the 'Introduction'), but reading it out loud helps a lot if you're worrying about things not flowing or making much sense. :) You've got me hooked from the first mention of magic. Keep it up! (No pressure intended.) I can imagine myself right there with your characters, so you're doing something right(if you were checking if it was). And, every writers style is different, so don't worry if it seems exactly perfect from my perspective. But, just keep writing(no matter if it is something completely irrelevant, just keep it on a different place(never know where you might find a place in a story where it becomes helpful)). It never helps to stare at an empty page. Unless it does. Never has for me, exactly. Hope you find what you are looking for in your adventure through writing! I also hope something here was helpful. :3

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This sounds really great so far! I especially like the story's concept! :D

Thanks

Scout, got comments? (SInce you've actually writen stuff for a while now and I...never finish anything)

Before I really get into this, just remember that to each writer there is a different style and not everything I say will match with you, and not everything you say will match with me(not that the last part matters much at the moment.)


I love it! I mean, if it's just a rough draft, it's perfect enough. It looks better than a lot of my drafts.
I can't find wrong to mention(other than a few simple writing errors in the 'Introduction'), but reading it out loud helps a lot if you're worrying about things not flowing or making much sense. :)
You've got me hooked from the first mention of magic. Keep it up!
(No pressure intended.)
I can imagine myself right there with your characters, so you're doing something right(if you were checking if it was). And, every writers style is different, so don't worry if it seems exactly perfect from my perspective.
But, just keep writing(no matter if it is something completely irrelevant, just keep it on a different place(never know where you might find a place in a story where it becomes helpful)). It never helps to stare at an empty page.
Unless it does.
Never has for me, exactly.
Hope you find what you are looking for in your adventure through writing!
I also hope something here was helpful.
:3