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AnnaHeartz
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Posted: 12/8/2014 at 1:01 PM Post #1
Hi everyone! This is the FAB Stories page.

I'm encouraging amazing story writers to join FAB. Only the most FAB story writers will be asked to join the club. Once joined, you will have to post a weekly story. Your stories will be posted in separate posts. All the links to your stories will be posted here. Submit your story samples here.

Read the FAB page:
https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=20036&page=1#1




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FAB Story 0001: "The Monsters We Are" - by Babaaeyes
https://www.sylestia.com/forums/?thread=20076&page=1#forumtop





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FAB Story 0001: "The Monsters We Are" - by Babaaeyes

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Edited By Annaheartz on 12/9/2014 at 5:02 PM.
Typhlosion
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Posted: 12/8/2014 at 3:17 PM Post #2
I'm also pinging you for sylesti design once I have a chance :3

Question: Does it have to be Sylestia-Related?

If not:

The Monsters We Are

When the wind whispers words to the moon, as the sky darkens to utter blackness, the feeling in my soul becomes darker, stronger, the shadow within, climbing out from the dark abyss that is its captor it consumes me and changes me my demon reveals itself.

The world has become dark, filled with new, evil presences. Almost every normal seeming human is affected, the words of the song, it changes people for the worst. A lot who have been through this try to dodge the song, it never works. Some humans have never been affected, they are looking for the source, trying to stop the madness intertwined within the fabric of the universe.
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Its a dark, cruel world out there. Dont think, even for a moment, that you are safe. Anyone may seem nice. Dont trust them. Deep inside, we are all monsters. I learned this the hard way. Before I tell you anything, I should start from the beginning.


Everything, believe it or not, was once normal. The world was in perfect order. But then they came. The demons so wicked, so cruel. They wanted to enslave humanity. I know, I know this all sounds like a fairytale, but trust me, its all true, and soon enough, youll be one too, most likely. Something protects us humans from becoming truly wicked, for some of us, the protection is stronger. Something pure inside our heart, and it fights the shadows. Because of this, the demons got frustrated. They still managed to enslave us for half our lives. At night. At night, when the wicked song of the demons comes, most everyone becomes a monster, a demon. Except for those with purer hearts. Since the demons have control of the monsters for the night, they order them to kill and serve. They kill the ones who havent become monsters. And they serve, mindlessly to the demons who cursed them. There is still a flaw to the demons curse. At daytime, the monsters become humans again and forget about the past night. They never know anything about what happens, they think all is normal. Im telling you, you could be one of those monsters, or the demons may just have not spread to your area. Just be careful.

I was one of the purehearted.


Chapter 1

I left at dawn, and was surprised to see so many others were purehearted. We moved swiftly, making sure not to make any noises. We left our hometown behind, and all of us headed into the wilderness, the place where we could hide. As the sun rose, the last of us made it through the trees, slipping through the final shadows silently. We soon came across a cave, we all went inside, and patched up the entrance with rocks. A small stream ran across the cave, it lead right to a small pond, we drank the semi-clear water. None of us spoke for quite a while.

Finally, a man that looked about in his thirties spoke. "We cant just wait here, we'll starve. We have to do something, get rid of those demons!"
His reply was silence. We should at least work as a group, the pond can only stay for so long, and soon well need food. How are we going to get food if we stay cramped up in here!? The monsters only come at night, we still have plenty of daytime."
I spoke. "He's right. We cant just do nothing. I'm sure every one of you has a loved one who's back there." I broke into tears. "I-I just want my family back." I wiped my tears, they weren't going to help me. I needed to find the source of the song, to vanquish it, to destroy it. My rage was building up, the only thing I wanted to do was crush the song. Everyone who had escaped looked at me. I didn't care. At that moment, I felt like becoming a monster myself. I panted, breathing in shallow, quick breaths. Then I collapsed. I feared I would become a monster right there and then. Fortunately, I did not. But I forget what happens next, because i fainted.
As the others had told me, I lay there for hours, unmoving. They gathered resources and hoped for the best. When I had awoken, I heard arguing.
"We cant wait for her to recover much longer-" The voices were distant, I strained to hear them, and in my weak state, you can imagine how well that went.
I got up, shakily. I wobbled a bit, but everything was fine. I walked closer to the voices, hoping they saw I had awakened. As I walked, I came to the main room of the cave. A huge argument was held, everyone was forced to choose a side. Nobody even noticed I was awake.
For the first side, the leader was a girl, she looked about fifteen, more or less anyways. She had red hair and pale skin, her eyes were a deep blue. "I say we should stay here, its our best bet, and there will be plenty resources."
The other side of the argument, the leader was a boy. He looked fourteen. He had short black hair, covering one of his eyes. His skin was very pale. And the one eye that I saw was a golden amber color. "We cant just stay here. They'll find us eventually, and there are not unlimited resources, they will soon end. It's better to leave now."
I shook my head. There was an idea, but I wasn't sure anyone wanted to hear it, much less side with me on it. But, still, I spoke. "Quiet, both ideas are interesting, but I have a better one." Everyone glared at me. "There should be groups, of three, four, or five people. That way its not as dangerous if you get tracked. Each group will travel different routes, and we will all meet up at chosen areas. At the areas, you can talk to others, and report the progress on the song and other things." I looked at everyone. I was not afraid of them.
"Do we get to choose groups?" Someone yelled from somewhere.
"Thats what I figured." I said. "No more than five people in a group though." The argument stopped, and everyone went joining groups and looking for others. No one asked me to join a group. I understood why.
Except, the boy that had been the leader of one side of the argument came up to me. "Interesting idea you have there." He said.
"Thank you, I guess." I said cautiously, I knew he wanted something, but what was it?
"Hey, can I join your group? I dont exactly have one."
"Me neither, so I guess you can." He wanted something more, I could sense it.
He smiled, it looked rather creepy. "My name's Cole."
"Well, nice to meet you..." I trailed off, something was definitely eerie about him. I just couldn't put a finger on it. "But I'd better get ready with supplies and everything." I said cautiously.


Lol is that too much? XD
Edited By Babaaeyes on 12/10/2014 at 4:04 PM.
AnnaHeartz
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Posted: 12/8/2014 at 4:38 PM Post #3
This is a nice story. However if the story is too long with too many chapters, it might be like a movie script and people might get bored reading a long story.

This is an interesting story. At first it's like Persona 3. People transmogrifies at midnight except for those who are gifted. (I'm a fan of Persona. You're making me wanna play Persona 3 now XD) But seriously, from what I've interpreted, all humans have good and evil sides. If the person is weak, he will be more likely fall to the darkness and become wicked (demon). If the reader is too literal, then he won't catch the message of the author, the message of the story. Some may catch the message but some may not coz it's too deep.

I hope that you can put the message of this story in a short story and make it a little more simple so the kids reading this would understand the message of the story too and that they would have fun reading the stories. I would appreciate if the story is Sylestia related. You can use variety of sylestie species as your characters. Otherwise the moderators might transfer it to another forum page. Thank you! :)

Members will be posted in the FAB page soon. I also saw your pet designs. They're great but I think it would be better if you'd be one of the FAB story writers.
Edited By Annaheartz on 12/8/2014 at 4:40 PM.
Soltra8
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Posted: 12/8/2014 at 10:52 PM Post #4
Babaa!!! That was an amazing story! But maybe move it to the other fiction part of the forums first? :3 and please continue! I wanna know what happens!

Anna, maybe for the writers who prefer writing non syestia based foctid never find anothe rPersona player here.on, create a other fiction version of this? Also, did you prefer Persona 1, 2, 3 or 4 XD I love Persona and the Shin Megami Tensei fanchise lol. Thought Id never find another Persona player here lol.
Edited By Soltra8 on 12/8/2014 at 10:53 PM.
AnnaHeartz
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Posted: 12/8/2014 at 11:57 PM Post #5
I never played Persona 1. I guess I wasn't born when it was released coz I never found a copy. I was still a kid when I played Persona 2. I wasn't able to finish the game coz it was too hard and complicated for me. I was just a kid back then! XD But it was my favorite. Maya and Tatsuya forever! lol I like Persona 3 and 4 too.

I love Babaa's story too. I like series too. I want to read the next chapters. It's very deep and sensible if you can see the message she trying to tell in the story. But aside from this one, maybe she can make simple stories too.

Hmm... Maybe I should make different archives in the FAB Stories page so stories will be organized base on its category. I think I'll put this one under Supernatural Archive.
AnnaHeartz
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Posted: 12/9/2014 at 12:02 AM Post #6
Babaa,

You forgot to put the title of your story. Please let me know the title so I can post it separately and create a link to it in the FAB Stories main page. First story ever! :)
Typhlosion
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Posted: 12/9/2014 at 3:42 PM Post #7
Added it
AnnaHeartz
Level 70
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Posted: 12/11/2014 at 2:49 PM Post #8
It's an amazing story Babaaeyes! Welcome to FAB! :)
AnastenLights
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Posted: 12/31/2014 at 4:00 PM Post #9
(Maybe there could be a thread for this in the Other Fiction section- mine's also non-sylestia related)
Here's the beginning of a story I started writing:
A hooded figure stood, looking into the still surface of a lake. Silence fell for a brief moment, then, as if in a trance, the figure spoke. "The star spirits have spoken." She lifted her hood and turned to face a small, wolf-like creature. "At last, they have revealed to me the secret location of the Forgotten Isles"
The wolf touched a paw to the lake's surface, causing ripples to spread throughout the water. He laughed, his voice rough, "Perhaps we might live long enough to see it . . ."
The girl ran her fingers through his black fur, looking wishfully up at the stars, "If only that were possible."
"Oh, but it is . . ." Rang a voice from behind them. The wolf moved in front of the girl, growling.
A dark-haired man walked out of the shadows, dark hair draped down his shoulders and back. "The council has spoken. You have been ordered to appear at the next meeting, to decide the fate of the Lost . . ."

I know it's short, but it's just an example of my writing.
AnnaHeartz
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Posted: 1/1/2015 at 12:44 PM Post #10
It's really interesting MasterOfDragons. I'll be waiting for the rest of the story then I'll post it on FAB Stories.
 
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